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We took a brief boat tour one morning of one of the Louisiana swamps. I think we had good luck with the bird sightings and accompanying environment. Here’s a sample.
Any comments appreciated.
Canon R7, 200-800mm, handheld
Settings vary
Processed in PureRaw 4 and Photoshop.
Holy cow @Allen_Sparks ! These are wonderful!
Love the first one because of the habitat and the heron is so well placed in it.
Love the second one because we get such a good view of the bird. (just wish for a smidgen more room on the bottom?
And the raptor!
And then there’s a bird I don’t recognise. A heron of some description with beautiful eye lashes.
Great work on all of them.
Thanks Glenys. I also was looking for more room on bottom in second shot but that’s all I have.
Hi Allen, I lean toward the first one as well, though the others are certainly no slouches. What sets this image apart for me is the sense of place. The cypress trunks, the trailing curtains of Spanish moss, the green water threading between the buttresses: all of it tells us exactly where this heron lives and what kind of patience the swamp demands of him.
The fact that the bird is partially tucked behind one of the trunks is, I think, the quiet genius of the frame. It feels less like a portrait and more like a moment we were lucky to witness. We are not the photographer pointing a long lens at a subject. We are someone drifting past in a kayak who happened to glance left at exactly the right second. That partial concealment turns the viewer into a privileged guest rather than an intruder, and it gives the image an intimacy that a fully exposed bird would never quite achieve.
There is also a lovely visual conversation happening between the heron and the trees. His vertical posture echoes the cypress trunks, his grays and browns blend gently with the bark, and yet that touch of yellow on the beak is enough to anchor the eye and pull us toward him through the layered foreground. The other shots are beautiful, but this one trusts the surroundings to do half the storytelling, and that trust pays off.
Thanks Sebastien, the first image is my favorite as well. The swamp that morning was a magical place and I think the first image displays that best.
Hi Allen,
What a shots these are !! very sharp with fantastic colors and exposition.
Are these all done handheld or did you use a tripod ?
The first picture is my favorite of the bunch. I can see the bird trying to hide while you pass by on a boat and disturbing the peaceful and quiet waters of the swamp.
Nature is amazing, the birds colors matching very closely the tree trunk to hide from his prey.
The green of the background make it pop-out while the lines of the tree trunks forming a V is naturally driving the eye to the subject.
Perfect composition and exposition.
Thank you for sharing these photos.
Thank you Lauric and welcome! All these shots were handheld.
Hi Allen
Looks like you had a good boat ride. I like the first photograph over the second, because of the open environment. The framing in the third and fourth photos works for me. All four photographs have good color, feather detail, and eye contact.
Peter
Beautiful frames! I particularly loved the first one, felt like I was there on a boat in the swamp. The light is beautifully even to my eyes.
Hi Allen. As usual all great shots. The first image would be a pleasing environmental shot as is, but the heron puts it over the top for me.
Beautifully done, Allen. The first image also appeals to me the most as it really creates a sense of place and scale.
