# Barely there

**URL:** <https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633>\
**Category:** Image Critiques\
**Tags:** landscape\
**Created:** [February 3, 2026, 3:26pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633 "2026-02-03T15:26:59Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 9\
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**Author:** ![Don\_Peters](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/don_peters/32/87970_2.png) [@Don\_Peters](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Don_Peters)\
**Post date:** [February 3, 2026, 3:26pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/1 "2026-02-03T15:26:59Z")

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![Saguaro and palo verde c-.jpg](https://images.naturephotographers.network/original/3X/0/0/00e1c97b64a934f2aa2792f8251eb7d8e3d63af9.jpeg)

> **Critique Style Requested:** _Standard_
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> The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

### Description

The saguaro cactus in the background drew my eye.

### Specific Feedback

All comments are welcome.

### Technical Details

ISO 4000, 142mm, f/8, 1/160th.

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### Critique Template

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Composition:  
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**Author:** ![Jim\_Gavin](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/j/f9ae1b/32.png) [@Jim\_Gavin](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Jim_Gavin)\
**Post date:** [February 3, 2026, 5:06pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/2 "2026-02-03T17:06:15Z")

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Composition is wonderful. I like that the foreground branches call our attention to the cactus. Just the right amount of color.

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**Author:** ![Russell\_Carpenter](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/russell_carpenter/32/77777_2.png) [@Russell\_Carpenter](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Russell_Carpenter)\
**Post date:** [February 3, 2026, 6:55pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/3 "2026-02-03T18:55:18Z")

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I like this a lot. For me, a photograph works when it makes you look and then look again. Placing the saguaro in an unexpected place, on the left side of the frame, was inspired.

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**Author:** ![Don\_Peters](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/don_peters/32/87970_2.png) [@Don\_Peters](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Don_Peters)\
**Post date:** [February 3, 2026, 8:29pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/4 "2026-02-03T20:29:43Z")

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Jim, Gavin, thank you both for the comments.

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**Author:** ![Ralf\_Mantzel](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/ralf_mantzel/32/83956_2.png) [@Ralf\_Mantzel](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Ralf_Mantzel)\
**Post date:** [February 4, 2026, 8:59am UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/5 "2026-02-04T08:59:08Z")

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Nice!! I needed to look twice, I like that 🙂  
The expression “behind the chaos” came to my mind.  
The colors contribute quite good to the intension, well seen…

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**Author:** ![Don\_Peters](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/don_peters/32/87970_2.png) [@Don\_Peters](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Don_Peters)\
**Post date:** [February 4, 2026, 2:35pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/6 "2026-02-04T14:35:25Z")

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> [@Ralf\_Mantzel](#):
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> The expression “behind the chaos” came to my mind.

I like that, 🙂

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**Author:** ![Ed\_Lowe](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/e/e36b37/32.png) [@Ed\_Lowe](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Ed_Lowe)\
**Post date:** [February 4, 2026, 8:34pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/7 "2026-02-04T20:34:51Z")

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Hi Don,  
This is obviously very busy, but I think it is very well organized due to those two branches coming in from the right side and directing the viewer toward the left where we are greeted with the saguaro trying to blend in all of the chaos. I also very much like the subdued green tones in this image. No suggestions from me as this is very nicely done.

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**Author:** ![james7](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/j/eada6e/32.png) [@james7](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/james7)\
**Post date:** [February 4, 2026, 11:30pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/8 "2026-02-04T23:30:35Z")

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Super image Don. Curious to see how it might play out in B/W. I’m going to steal this idea next time I’m in Joshua Tree, where there are plenty of Paloverdes and cacti.

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**Author:** ![Bonnie\_Lampley](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/bonnie_lampley/32/4825_2.png) [@Bonnie\_Lampley](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Bonnie_Lampley)\
**Post date:** [February 8, 2026, 7:00pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/barely-there/49633/9 "2026-02-08T19:00:18Z")

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Just popping in to say this is fabulous!
