Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
" BUNNY! " says our very precocious 2-yr-old neighbor, Balty.
We said “Isn’t that a flower?”
“BUNNYBUNNYBUNNYBUNNYBUNNY !”, jumping up and down and pointing to the screen.
“Please show me”
So he crawls onto my lap, and sticks his finger on the computer screen right on one of the buds.
“Yes, sweetie - you’re right! That looks like a bunny”
“There is a wisdom in children, a kind of knowing, a kind of believing, that we, as adults, do not have. ”
― Adam Gidwitz, A Tale Dark & Grimm
Specific Feedback
All comments welcome.
I struggled with the comp - does this work?
Technical Details
“Studio” image of this fresh bloom in my cheap lightbox.
No chance of an outdoor shot - gale force winds despite SUN are coming tonight and tomorrow, and it’s already very windy. (Love storms, summer or winter)
Software: Adobe Photoshop 25.7 + DxO Pure Raw 5
Exposure Time: 1/250 sec
F Number: f/5.6
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 320
Exposure Program: Aperture priority
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Flash: multi-LED lightbox
Lens Model: E 28-200mm F2.8-5.6 A071
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. This comp works very well for me and the color palette is marvelous. Very nicely captured and presented. >=))>