Fall in Rhode Island

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Fall in Rhode Island
Fall in Rhode Island3000×1841 2.05 MB

Walking the beach September morning.

Type of Critique Requested

  • Conceptual: Feedback on the message and story conveyed by the image.
  • Emotional: Feedback on the emotional impact and artistic value of the image.

Specific Feedback and Self-Critique

foreground need to be darker?

Technical Details

Lumix S5

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Hi Steve. I love the light and the composition with the fence boards. The "falling fence on the left and the way it becomes darker there is really effective at creating a mood. However, Human and Fauna is for domestic animals or wild animals in an obviously human environment and I don’t see any critters in this image, so I’m going to move it over to non-nature.

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Hi Steve, when I first saw this, I thought I was missing the Fauna part… now I see @Dennis_Plank moved it to Non-Nature.

Either way, this is a nice study of repeating lines moving along a slope. I like the lighting too. I wonder how this would look in B&W… Well done.

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Thanks, Guys
Saw human in the category title and jumped the gun. Thanks for moving it for me
Steve