First Light Companions

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WLI_0525 - European Fallow Buck ((Melanistic)) & Doe (Dama dama).jpg
WLI_0525 - European Fallow Buck ((Melanistic)) & Doe (Dama dama).jpg2321×1548 1.87 MB

Critique Style Requested: In-depth

The photographer has shared comprehensive information about their intent and creative vision for this image. Please examine the details and offer feedback on how they can most effectively realize their vision.

Self Critique

For me, the strength is the light and atmosphere — the soft mist really simplifies the scene and brings the focus onto the shapes of the two deer. The balance between them feels natural.

I do question whether the buck is a bit too dark and losing some detail, and whether a slight shift in composition might improve it, though it mostly works.

The aim was just to keep it simple and natural — focusing on shape, light, and a quiet, understated moment rather than anything too detailed or stylised.

Creative direction

The aim was to keep it simple and natural, focusing on light, shape, and atmosphere rather than detail. The mist helped soften everything and simplify the background, letting the deer stand out more.

I wasn’t going for anything stylised — just a clean, understated feel that reflects the scene as it was. It was more about a quiet, calm moment between the two deer, where they still feel at ease in a shared space.

Specific Feedback

Tonal balance, particularly in the darker areas of the buck, and whether the level of shadow works or if a little more detail would help.

Also the composition and spacing between the two subjects, and whether the overall balance feels settled or slightly off.

Technical Details

Camera: Canon EOS R6

Lens: Canon EF 100-400mm f/4.5-5.6L IS II USM with Canon Extender EF 1.4x III

Focal Length: 420mm

Aperture: f/8

Shutter Speed: 1/500 sec

ISO: 2000

Exposure Compensation: +0.7

Techniques:
Shot handheld in misty conditions, using available light.

Processing:
Processed in Adobe Camera Raw. Adjustments included noise reduction, slight reduction to highlights and overall exposure, sharpening, and minor levels adjustments.

Description

This was taken in a public park where deer and people share the same space, which felt appropriate for the theme. It is also an older image, taken around five years ago.

The soft morning light is what drew me to the scene, picking out the shapes, particularly along the buck, with the doe sitting well alongside. The mist helped to simplify the background and add atmosphere.

I am happy with the overall feel and how the two subjects sit within the frame, though I do question whether the buck is slightly too dark, or if that better supports the emphasis on shape and light.

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I think this maybe your first post Matthew; so welcome. NPN is a great place to be.

The thumbnail image doesn’t do this image justice. When I clicked on the image to have a better look, the deer just about jumped off the screen. They have the most beautfiul eyes.

Your self critique is indepth and you have created an image that is simpe and natural. Given the light, IMO, there is just enough detail in the buck. You could possibly raise Shadows, but you may lose the feel.

I like the togetherness of the two subjects, but I feel the image would benefit from a large crop to just behind the doe’s hind leg. I might consider softening the line between the yellow grasses and the white sky. I’m ever so slightly bugged by the mist covered tree outline in the background.

This is such a beautiful image Matthew and worth “playing” with!

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Matthew, welcome to NPN and the Weekly Challenge. I am surprised because the software usually announces when it’s someone’s first post, but I had to do some “digging”. This is an intriguing look at this pair. The warm light is lovely and the pair have great eye highlights. I wouldn’t suggest any further dodging of the deer. I like how the light shows off the bit of grass hanging from her mouth. I am bothered slightly by the emptiness of the upper background. It does create a strong sense of isolation, but also places the deer with context. It’s your choice, but I think a tiny bit of context up there would add nicely. I also think that @Glenys_Passier’s crop idea is an interesting possibility.

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@Glenys_Passier -

Thank you for your feedback. Unfortunately even though I shoot RAW, once I have something I like, I save it and delete the RAWs! A poor habit to have. However, I am interested in what you have said about the tree; are you suggesting ideally not to have it at all visible, or to have it more visible, perhaps more texture/outline if not full on detail? The latter I feel will draw the attention away from the solice of the two deer.

@Mark_Seaver Thank you too! I did make an introductory post, my first post (both of the same photo) and then this for the weekly challenge. Could you further eloborate on context? As in my wording and thoughts or with the actual image itself?

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Matthew, as presented there’s a sense of seeing these two in a dream, which may be your intent. Adding a bit more detail in the background would ground these two in reality.

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I have never heard of deleting RAW files. The paint never dries on a RAW file. You can go back 20 years and dig out a RAW file and rework it.

Here’s my take on the tree. My poor wee brain is confused. Is there a tree there? Or is there not? Maybe if it were more prominant? But I feel it should be less obvious and blended into the fog.

It’s such a lovely image and well worth the effort of a few different versions for comparison.