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Self Critique
I like the direction of the sun and how it backlights the fern
Creative direction
My aim with this image is to isolate the beauty of this fern in the glowing early morning sun. I don’t need it to be fully in focus and sharp everywhere but a dreamy artistic image.
Specific Feedback
I am open to whatever feedback comes to mind but I am most interested in the Aesthetic and emotional impact.
Technical Details
ISO 500
F stop 7.1
Shutter 1/40 sec
Description
I captured this image during an early morning while exploring an area where the plants were being bathed in the soft early sun. I isolated it using a 400 mm lens
Martha: Really nice use of your long lens. I think you met your goals very nicely. It looks like the OOF segment on the lower part of the fern was from shooting through some intervening FG stuff. We used to call this cramming and I like the effect you achieved. Well conceived, captured and presented. >=))>
Thank you Bill. Yes, I love shooting through, I often do this with my images. Glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback. I thought I was posting it to the weekly challenge but I don’t think I did that ha ha
Lovely rim lighting and the greens are soft and relaxing. I agree that the shooting through adds to the lazy-day mood. My only suggestion would be to add in more hazy green to the TLC, as the grey there intrudes a little on my peaceful feeling when I look at this.
Martha, this is quietly inspiring. Your use of the cram effect looks good. About 10 years ago, “cramming” was an “in” thing for flower posts…) I like your mix of partially obscurred and sharp with the backlight. I’m thinking this is cropped to 4x5 and wondering how going square (with more off the bottom) would look.
Backlight is doing extraordinary work here, it turns each crozier and pinna into something glowing and almost translucent, and the trichomes form a continuous halo that traces the entire silhouette. It’s the kind of light that rewards the species: young ferns are built to be photographed this way, and you were smart enough to recognize and take advantage of that.
To me there are many things working very well in your image
Light and translucency
Side-back lighting reveals internal structure (you can see the veining and inner shadows of the leaflets) while simultaneously edge-lighting the hairs. Few subjects in nature accept light this generously, and the exposure is judged well, the rim glows without blowing to pure white, and the deeper interior greens hold detail.
The gesture of the subject
The frond’s S-curve from top to lower-left, with the tightly coiled fiddlehead anchoring the bottom of the curl, gives the image real movement. The eye enters at the bright top, travels down the stem, and lands on that tight spiral, a satisfying visual sentence.
Color harmony
A near-monochromatic green palette with subtle warm shifts in the highlights. Nothing competes with the subject. The square crop also suits the vertical-but-curling form.
