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Description
The Cedar Waxwings are back at this tree where I have photographed them in the past, but today the light was very low with heavy fog and I wasn’t happy with what I could get of the birds, and I did a few shots of the berries that were more to my liking.
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All comments welcome! If I had been thinking I would have cranked down the ISO as I was on a tripod, and maybe tried for more DOF. There was a lot of noise but it tamed well enough.
Technical Details
A darker smudge in the LL was tamed with a mask and Curves, and the OOF berries were lightened a little with a 30% clone brush. Cropped from both sides.
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Diane: I like your comp and for me your DOF choice works well. I do like the OOF berries and think they are a nice complement. Great find and a fine result. >=))>
Diane, a fine image here. My immediate thought was to eliminate the BG berries. However, it actually works as presented as almost an “echo” of the FG group…very nice indeed…
I’m sure you’ll catch the waxwings how you want them! But this is a lovely image showing the berries, and those three leaves are the icing. I like the OOF berries in the BG. I’m loving that BG with the OOF smudges of pinks. I wonder were they painted? And, then you have those little dew/fog drops and spider webs! It’s a wonderful image to explore even without the birds.
I went back today and got a few more birds and did a focus stack on the berries although I missed exactly the same angle. Will post it when I have time to play with it.
A pleasing composition, Diane. Has a painterly feel to it. I’m obviously in the minority, but I think the painterly feel would come through more without the background berries. This would look nice framed.
OOF echo for the win! I like it. I had to sit with it for a few until it felt cohesive in my brain, but now I have it does. I like the lichens and the great tie that makes being between the red and the yellow on the color wheel. The BG is a tad gray, but it probably was and moving to much lighter could change the mood. As is it feels like the winding down it is.
Thanks, @Allen_Brooks and @Kris_Smith! I’ve shot the same branch two subsequent times when I was stalking the birds and never managed to get the same relationship with the branch behind, and the light was a little different. This one is still my favorite.
