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Self Critique
I found the hummocks of White Sands NP to be interesting visually, especially in the late afternoon light. This was actually taken after the thunderstorm scene over the mountains. As you can see, the skies were very interesting all around that day. I hope the tangle of roots is the main area of interest although the skies and the flat area to the right are also strong.
Creative direction
The typical root hummocks were wonderful so my main intent was to convey the visual incongruity on the more smooth and softly shaped sand dunes.
Specific Feedback
Any feedback is welcomed. Probably the conceptual aspect is the more important here.
Technical Details
Canon R5, EF 16-35 f/4 @ 35mm, f/8 @ 1/40, ISO 100, EC+0.67, handheld
Description
We were on a sunset walkabout with a park ranger for this image. It was a good sunset for sure and the shapes, textures, and lighting were outstanding. This particular hummock seemed the most striking. I do wish I had stepped just a tiny bit to the right. We were moving along constantly and there was little time for contemplation.
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I like this. There’s zero doubt about what the subject of the photo is. I like the diagonal created by the hummocks and the low angle side lighting. Nice processing. I had to look up what a hummock is.
Thank you. The gypsum sands are very interesting and different despite resembling rock-based sands. The hummocks were everywhere and provided some variety to the topography.
Clearly the roots are the subject, but I think I will be the one going against the grain here. The roots kind of bother me due to the bright rock, I think, that is behind the roots. It is asking to be seen and the roots get in the way.
I like these types of images. They’re not beautiful in the traditional sense but they do stop you and make you think. The biggest issue in terms of composition is, for me, the bright rock behind the bush. I find it confusing.
