Indian Plum + Repost

For one week the Indian Plum Bushes sprout light green wings above their white flowers. Only after I saw @Margo_Taussig_Pinkerton work with Tulum Snow was I happy with my treatment of them (previous attempts mostly in color)

What technical feedback would you like if any?

Any and all

What artistic feedback would you like if any?

Any and all

Pertinent technical details or techniques:

Ran greens to white

Dick: This is really nice. Excellent conversion and I like the comp. I’m on the fence regarding the OOF BG spots behind the first flower but I do like this as is. Nicely done. >=))>

Yep. At first I liked the OOF, but I betta go look at working on them

I like this a lot, artsy. B&W conversion worked very well, Agree with oof spots. Completely dark background would make this better. Love the composition and the contrast between the whitish plant and the dark background. Good sharpness on both the subjects.

The conversion to B&W works beautifully. Good tonal range, lines and textures. As already pointed out the only distractions are the whitish spots in the background. Well worth the time and effort it will take to remove them.

Yes – much better. Thanks to @ravi @Bill_Fach @Patricia_Brundage

Dick: Just what the doctor ordered. :+1: :+1:>=))>