Lay Lady Lay

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic + Technical

About This Image

This lake is shrinking so quickly into small pond size that the Oriental Lesser Emperors were laying their eggs where they could find sites as far from the shore as possible. Just once they came quite close to me and I was able to catch them ovipositing. The pond skater is a curious by-stander.

Feedback Requested

All ideas welcome.

Technical Details

Camera: OM-1
Lens: 100-400mm (@186mm)
Shutter speed: 1/640s
Aperture: f/10
ISO: 1600

Tonal treatment in LR, Denoise, small PS adjustments, tidied up water a little and cropped.

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Very nice simple image - pond skater adds interest.

Love the crop and composition

Only tiny suggestion- and may not be appropriate but maybe warm up the WB a little?

Great shot

Regards

Huw

Mike, this is a great shot, so sharp showing all the details, plus a reflection. Excellent capture.
I think I agree with Huw that the blue is a bit strong.
Alice

Mike: Judging from your techs you were able to get reasonably close and get the plane of focus just right. Terrific action and I suppose they were a little too preoccupied to pay you much attention. Great job taking advantage of a special opportunity. >=))>

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Mike, this is an excellent photo that speaks to more than just the egg laying behavior. The specks of plants, the reflections and the mix of blue and green tones let this stand out.

The plane of focus is perfect for the shot and the DOF was sufficient enough to get the wings in focus as well. Looks fine as presented…Jim

Thanks @alice @Bill_Fach @Huw_Thomas @Jim_Zablotny @Mark_Seaver - as always I really appreciate your feedback.

Great shot, Mike! I love the innocent bystander as a special detail! Nice moment, beautiful sharpness and the ideal DOF to get the reflection of the wings sharp as well.
Grt, Ingrid.

Thanks, Ingrid; you are my window on Africa!