Look Down


Look Down


Look Down

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Wherever we go there is something to see. Walking with my dog, Finley, I noticed the fun he was having crunching through the leaves as colors had recently peaked. Look down he message me.
So, I did. Simple enough with my iPhone 11 that is shot with the LR mobile app.

Specific Feedback

Composition and the sensation of crunchy leaves, especially in the top two images. Any comments too.

Technical Details

iPhone 11 shot with LR mobile app with .dng files.


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There’s an amazing feeling of depth and layering in these images, Larry. I like the compositions in all of them, though I think the first appeals to me the most. Excellent work.

Thanks, Dennis. I appreciate the positive feedback.

These are all great Larry. I really like the honest feeling bright colors in all of them, and the faded browns and greys. These do have great depth, especially the first two. I do love nice beds of fallen leaves in the fall. This transports me there. Nice images, I could see a nice series out of this type of image.

Thanks, Ed. I appreciate your visit and response.