Oriental Dragonflies Do It (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 1 (latest)

What changed: Cleared up BG in URC and added canvas to the bottom.

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic + Technical

About This Image

Sing along to Cole Porter! I saw these two by the river today. The red one is the female. Oriental Lesser Emperors to be exact.

Feedback Requested

Is the BG still intrusive? I tried to make it less busy.

Technical Details

Camera: OM-1
Lens: 100-400mm
Focal length: 328mm
Shutter speed: 1/640s
Aperture: f/6.3
ISO: 3200

LR, then Denoise, then PS to get the Highlights tamed and boost contrast a little. Cropped to Portrait format. BG bits removed.

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Mike, You’ve got good sharpness on both of the DF’s. The bit of blue on his first abdominal segment, is a fine change-of-pace, that I expect is characteristic of the species. I suspect that you put a lot of work into “taming” the background. The darkness behind his wing is somewhat distracting.

Mike: My first impression was that they were mimicking the yin and yang of the Korean flag. Great capture of the critters and the behavior. I’m OK with the BG but I’m wondering if in the original capture you could select the subject, inverse and then drop the exposure/increase the blur on the BG. Certainly a subject worthy of effort and pretty good as is. >=))>

Wonderful capture with great detail! You must have been very close to them. The BG looks good to me but a bit more blur or contrast decrease in the UR corner could be worth a try. Maybe add a bit of canvas to the bottom? Excellent in any case!!

Beautifully captured image of the strange mating behavior of dragonflies, Mike. Very well done.

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Thanks @Bill_Fach @Mark_Seaver @Dennis_Plank @Diane_Miller . I was standing on a wall with the zoom near the long end, and holding back a branch between me and the subjects, with no leeway for the BG. But that’s part of the fun of catching living things in the wild, isn’t it? :wink:Revision is above.

Super revision! And for managing the acquisition in the first place, you get a whole bunch of extra points!!!

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Great job on the revised image, Mike.

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