Picnic lunch (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 2 (latest)

What changed: From Glenys’ suggestion of more environment – this is the full frame raw file.

Revision 1

What changed: And here is a tighter crop, as suggested by Glenys.

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic + Technical

About This Image

This morning there are still juveniles begging and a few are getting results.

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All comments welcome!

Technical Details

Camera: Canon EOS R5
Lens: RF200-800mm F6.3-9 IS USM + EXTENDER RF1.4x
Focal length: 403mm
Shutter speed: 1/180s
Aperture: f/13
ISO: 1600

Very minimal tonal adjustments in Lightroom, then into PS for cropping from the sides and very minor BG cloning at the edges.

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Excellent interaction shot, Diane. Nice natural framing and a pleasing, complementary background.

I see you’ve gone to the 200-800 lens. How does it compare to the 100-500?

Thanks, @Allen_Brooks ! I’ll still use the 100-500 for sure – it’s hard to beat – but I was coveting more reach. I gave some early impressions in several replies here, The juvenile Western Bluebirds are learning the ropes . In addition I would add that although it’s a little heavier and longer than the 100-500, it feels about equally manageable. The focus ring has a surprising throw but that gives good precision. The zoom ring is tighter than I like, but probably someone with bigger hands wouldn’t complain about it. I use a follow focus lever (several on Amazon) on the zoom ring to give me more leverage and a quick idea where I am in the zoom range. (It’s a neat idea used in video to pull focus smoothly.) The MFD increases dramatically as you zoom longer, so that compromises magnification and it’s no good for dragonflies. It’s fine with the 2x. At the typical distances for small birds you have as much loss of sharpness from atmosphere as from optics. For me, the old basic sharpening in the LR Develop module works better than all the newfangled stuff. One feature I really like is that, unlike the 100-500, you can tweak focus manually in back button configuration, with AF removed from the shutter button. The small light loss compared to the 100-500 is not an issue for me, as getting more magnification of the subject balances out the compromised detail of higher noise.

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i’m assuming these are Baltimore Orioles. I like the feeding behavior. Yes it is that time of year and a lot of the young ones are showing up at my feeders also. Well, not Baltimore Orioles but other species, including flickers, sparrows, chickadees, not hatches and Downey woodpeckers. I’ve got some new pictures so it’ll just take a while for me to post them.

This one has nice behavioral interaction.

Thanks, @David_Schoen ! I neglected to ID them – they are Bullock’s Orioles. We don’t get Baltimore’s here – just Bullock’s and Hooded. I’m seeing quite a few youngsters too. Different species seem to fledge over a fairly long period here.

Great behavioural shot Diane!. Love the colours, just falling into place.

When I was scrolling through the thumbnails, I instantly recognise this one as yours. The background not as clear as your usual. But I sure like the environment in this one. Would you consider a bigger crop?

Nice interaction you captured here Diane in an interesting setting. Critical focus on the heads of the birds is spot on,

Thanks, @Glenys_Passier and @Allen_Sparks ! Glenys, good point – the BG here isn’t very attractive. I did a cropped version. Is that what you had in mind?

And PS-- it is now SO much easier to add a revised version, with the new prompt at the top of a thread!

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Ha. No. I like your OP better. I meant to say, as in “bigger” more room to show the environment.

Thanks, @Glenys_Passier – so much for my intuition! Here’ the raw file – suggestions?? I always seem to go for the telephoto view.

Ah!!! Better…and even betterer! I really like the version with more habitat. The birds are strong enough to carry the image well. It’s funny how I’m liking more habitat in images now.

Thanks, @Glenys_Passier ! And now I agree – you’ve taught me a good lesson! The full frame version posted at the top, even though it’s a raw file (with very basic adjustments). The one I posted just above was inadvertently the next frame in the sequence – at 20 fps. Not much difference.

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