Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
When I spotted this little scene my immediate thought was, “Pied Piper”, thus the title as Big Red seems to be leading this entourage out of the garden. Every day is different with these flowers as per their name they only last a day and are gone the next. Fortunately they are prolific bloomers and there are still a number of them budding still.
Specific Feedback
I considered stacking this to get every flower in focus but liked the effect of the DOF falloff more. Your thoughts?
Technical Details
Sony A7rIII
Sony FE 70-200 f2.8 GM-II @ 154mm
ISO 400, 1/1000 @ f4
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Well named and a true change up in a “garden variety” composition overall here, Bill. The short DOF sets this up perfectly.