Purple loosestrife (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 1 (latest)

What changed: The light on purple OOF spots is reduced.

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

Purple loosestrife (Lythrum salicaria) grows on wetlands. It is honey-bearing, in Europe popular ornamental plant planted in rain gardens and around ponds, in America classified as a dangerous and highly destructive invasive species.

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All comments are welcome.

Background is already darkened, the long blade of grass subdued, yellow patches removed or subdued. I couldn’t do more without noticeable interference. A very slight vignette added.

Edited in Capture One.

PS. Petals are oversaturated a bit. I’m attaching corrected image which I think is better.

Technical Details

Camera: NIKON D780
Lens: Sigma 150-600mm F5-6.3 DG OS HSM | C (Nikon F)
Focal length: 340mm
Shutter speed: 1/250s
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO: 320

Jacek: I really like the light on this and your DOF management. I don’t find the original too saturated so both versions work for me. I might consider taming the light OOF purple spots in the BG but that’s a mere 1¢ nit. Nice find and a fine capture.>=))>

@Bill_Fach Thank you so much, Bill. I agree that both versions don’t differ much but I’m careful about overdone editing and images looking like post cards, therefore I prefere staying on the safe side. Yes, OOF puprle spots have too much light. My revised version is uploaded.

The original poster added a revised version of their image.

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I missed your OP. But, I’m really liking the small changes in the edit. I’m not a fan of overdone “post-card” images either. You’ve settled on a very nice crop. Nothing I would change.

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Color drenched, nearly glowing & beautifully sharp. Makes me remember that the horrible weed we hate in the US, is a natural beauty in its proper place.