# Rimrock Abstract. **URL:** \ **Category:** Image Critiques\ **Tags:** abstract\ **Created:** [November 15, 2024, 5:25pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/rimrock-abstract/44040 "2024-11-15T17:25:18Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 6\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Jim\_Gavin](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/j/f9ae1b/32.png) [@Jim\_Gavin](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Jim_Gavin)\ **Post date:** [November 15, 2024, 5:25pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/rimrock-abstract/44040/1 "2024-11-15T17:25:18Z")
![3N7A7487ac_1c.jpg](https://images.naturephotographers.network/original/3X/7/9/79985b45c43e68c60a09e736777a3d650c171e3f.jpeg) > **Critique Style Requested:** _Initial Reaction_ > > Please share your immediate response to the image before reading the photographer’s intent (obscured text below) or other comments. The photographer seeks a genuinely unbiased first impression. ### Questions to guide your feedback What is your emotional response? Curious about what this is? ### Other Information _Please leave your feedback before viewing the blurred information below, once you have replied, click to reveal the text and see if your assessment aligns with the photographer. Remember, this if for their benefit to learn what your unbiased reaction is._ ### Image Description Every year Rimrock Lake (reservoir) is almost drained for irrigation and salmon preservation. The lake bed offers some interesting photographic opportunities. This is taken at 400 (640 on canon 7DII) of an area with some small runoff that has some color in the water and dirt. ### Technical Details canon 7DmarkII; 100/400 @400; 1/500th; -2/3rds; WB: auto; 16.0; 640 ISO; handheld. ### Specific Feedback Any comments on all categories are appreciated, but mostly interested in comceptual and emotional reactions. * * * ### Critique Template Use of the template is optional, but it can help spark ideas. - Vision and Purpose: - Conceptual: - Emotional Impact and Mood: - Composition: - Balance and Visual Weight: - Depth and Dimension: - Color: - Lighting: - Processing: - Technical: ---
**Author:** ![Don\_Peters](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/don_peters/32/87970_2.png) [@Don\_Peters](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Don_Peters)\ **Post date:** [November 16, 2024, 12:36am UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/rimrock-abstract/44040/2 "2024-11-16T00:36:59Z")
Jim, my initial reaction was that this is interesting, It looks like desert terrain except for the colors. The colors are pleasant (hard to go wrong with orange and blue). All in all, I think it’s effective. ---
**Author:** ![Bonnie\_Lampley](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/bonnie_lampley/32/4825_2.png) [@Bonnie\_Lampley](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Bonnie_Lampley)\ **Post date:** [November 16, 2024, 7:53pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/rimrock-abstract/44040/3 "2024-11-16T19:53:29Z")
If you hadn’t titled it Rimrock Abstract, I would have thought it was an aerial shot of an active lava flow. In light of that, I’m thinking a bit more contrast might be interesting. Also, perhaps darken the light area in the upper right quadrant and even out the luminosity across the frame. Maybe even flip it around to give it more energy (so the orange tendrils are moving up, not down)? Here’s my thought. In any event, it’s well seen! ![3N7A7487](https://images.naturephotographers.network/original/3X/5/7/57b8540928b24ac393e8db91477ab8009d69b875.jpeg) ---
**Author:** ![Jim\_Gavin](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/j/f9ae1b/32.png) [@Jim\_Gavin](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Jim_Gavin)\ **Post date:** [November 17, 2024, 7:35am UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/rimrock-abstract/44040/4 "2024-11-17T07:35:57Z")
Don and Bonnie, Thank you for your helpful comments. Bonnie, I did not think of flipping it. I like it, but when I look at it, I keep wanting to flip it back because that is how I remember it when I was shooting it. ---
**Author:** ![Mark\_Seaver](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/mark_seaver/32/231_2.png) [@Mark\_Seaver](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Mark_Seaver)\ **Post date:** [November 17, 2024, 1:13pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/rimrock-abstract/44040/5 "2024-11-17T13:13:14Z")
Jim, this totally looks like an aerial view…of course from your perspective, it is…just not using a drone. The shapes, colors and textures look good in the original. I also believe that in an abstract often the goal is to create a feeling, not necessarily show a natural area, pushing the saturation is okay. Bonnie’s saturation push creates more drama. You’ve got an aerial view of an location that few will see. ---
**Author:** ![Jim\_Gavin](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/j/f9ae1b/32.png) [@Jim\_Gavin](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Jim_Gavin)\ **Post date:** [November 17, 2024, 6:36pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/rimrock-abstract/44040/6 "2024-11-17T18:36:15Z")
Mark, Thank you.