Re-post with colors separation and intensity increased
Original post - Kristin wondered where the colors went …
On the forested side of a tidal lagoon on the north edge of the Olympic Peninsula in Washington state, I ran into this maple displaying its colors in August. Had to look it up to give it a name. I was after an image of reflections and this little clump of maple helped out a lot. Originally the logs were bleached white, but they turned out to have decent color when burned.
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The logs and forest extended quite a bit left and right in the original exposure. They give the scene some context and relaxation, but this crop is more focused on the tree and its reflection.
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Is this a composite: No
5D3, 24-105 F4 @70mm, tripod (gingerly braced on floating log), SS1/400, f/5.0, ISO 1000 (OOPS, was left over from some handheld shooting a while before)
This looks like many a bank where I have paddled. Messy, but following a pattern with order and method. The colors are rich and complementary. Makes me think of nature working quietly and indifferently to humans. I’d like to see a bit wider tonal range - things feel a little muted. Maybe let the logs off the leash a bit?
Actually, I did mute this down from its earlier saturation and brightness levels. The re-post is with colors amped up with Man from Mars Method. Thanks greatly, I like the change.
Increasing the luminosity of the yellows in the rework helps add a bit more snap. I think having the logs in the scene helps the composition avoid being just a static reflection. But for me, the logs in the rework have become warmer and more saturated than I like. I like what the rework has done to the rest of scene, but I would prefer to dial back the logs slightly.
It’s also kind of neat that you were able to incorporate fall foliage with the ocean.
Yep, I noticed that after I posted. Changed now in my library, and much more appealing.