# Splash **URL:** \ **Category:** Image Critiques\ **Tags:** landscape\ **Created:** [September 6, 2020, 6:07am UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/splash/16684 "2020-09-06T06:07:22Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 2\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![dalegphoto](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/dalegphoto/32/8835_2.png) [@dalegphoto](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/dalegphoto)\ **Post date:** [September 6, 2020, 6:07am UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/splash/16684/1 "2020-09-06T06:07:22Z")
![splash](https://images.naturephotographers.network/original/3X/2/6/26fd34b92f6069411b74f96c337289a89e64dace.jpeg) I’ve been really getting into editing seascapes again so here’s my latest - I’d really love to get some feedback. ### What technical feedback would you like if any? I’d love to know if there’s anything I can do to help add to the composition & perhaps inject a little more ‘mood’ into the image. Wondering how the colours look also ### What artistic feedback would you like if any? I’d love anything, I’m open to any thoughts people have ### Pertinent technical details or techniques: (If this is a composite, etc. please be honest with your techniques to help others learn) 3 images → 1 for the sky, 2 for the foreground stitched/ in photoshop & modified with camera raw, dodge/burning ---
**Author:** ![Dick\_Knudson](https://assets.naturephotographers.network/user_avatar/community.naturephotographers.network/dick_knudson/32/60742_2.png) [@Dick\_Knudson](https://community.naturephotographers.network/u/Dick_Knudson)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2020, 5:39pm UTC](https://community.naturephotographers.network/t/splash/16684/2 "2020-09-07T17:39:16Z")
Beautifully composed scene. Delightful luminosity of sun, sky, water, spray, and rocks. I could do with a bit more light and shadow in the left-side water. Not sure I should have brightened that right side spray, as it looks a bit too much. ![splash r1](https://images.naturephotographers.network/original/3X/d/8/d84a8f4a3e187992e917e39c473a9f9f5b54b6cc.jpeg)