Study in Blue, Yellow and Green: Orange Peel Clematis

Image Critiques
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Original - orange peel clematis 20260922-DSC04658.jpg
Original - orange peel clematis 20260922-DSC04658.jpg1556×1002 1.12 MB

stack of 2 images
stack of 2 images1620×1080 1.31 MB

Study in Yellow and Green
stack of 2 images

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

Just playing - flowers new territory for me - no critters around today.

Just making compositionsI like in nice light.
These pics are all compositionally based on colours - bright yellowS, nice blues, nice shapes of leaves

Feedback Requested

Anything that comes to mind . These Asia clematis are wild in our hedge and an amazing colour and structure which I hope to have captured.
Suggest away if you think of anything

Regards

Huw

Technical Details

Camera:a7v
Lens:90mmm macro
Focal length:90
Shutter speed:1/250
Aperture:f/20
ISO:5000
Flash:yes stacked 2 images

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Any thoughts on these anyone?

huw

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Well it’s definitely colorful, but I think the up from under shot could be simplified by moving some things out of the way as you set up. I like the flower and the yellow leaves with the stems, but a lot of the overlapping leaves on the left are too heavy and compete with the flower. Also the exiting stems are too much. I think there’s a lot of potential with this plant though and I like the upward view with the bold blue sky. Great colors and vibrance.

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Ok thanks, comments appreciated

Huw