Wasp and Snowberry (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 1 (latest)

What changed: top flower tweak

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

Another experimental crop

Does it work?

Feedback Requested

Micro contrast applied to wasp only - flash seems to have frozen action ok, back lit rim lighting on wasp
Plenty of space in crop -

Does it work?

All suggestions and nits welcome

Technical Details

Camera:a74
Lens:90mm
Focal length:90mm
Shutter speed:1/250
Aperture:f/14
ISO:200
Flash:yes TTl

Huw: Crop works for me and I think the overall result is excellent. Looks like the flash froze the wings and the sharpness of the wasp is spot on. Really well done.>=))>

Excellent focus and exposure on the wasp and the lighting works for me, Huw. I kind of wish the end of that one bud/fruit didn’t touch the top of the frame, but I don’t know if you could find an better place to crop-these kinds of clusters aren’t friendly that way.

Thanks / I’m sure I can tweak it :slight_smile:

The original poster added a revised version of their image.

Hi Huw,
Wow you really hit this one out of the park. The bee looks so real I’m about to smack my laptop screen. I like the added color of the flowers and green buds.
Fantastic!!
Alice

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Great little tweak on the revised version, Huw.

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I picked the revised version of Wasp and Snowberry because the subject is in active flight along with context for a complete story. Vespid wasps, like the yellowjacket pictured visit flowers and fruit as a food source at the end of summer. The subject is crisp and the wings’ motion are frozen in time. Yellowjackets, although brilliantly patterned with yellow and black are wonderful subjects for the macro-photographer but are often avoided by macro-photographers due to their abundance and somewhat aggressive tendencies. A wonderful image showing an insect prowling for food.

Many thanks for the EP
Appreciated++

Yep, that wasp looks almost 3-d. I love how it’s flying in on the diagonal of the flowers. Congrats, Huw!

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