What Do You See?

Critique Style Requested: Initial Reaction

Please share your immediate response to the image before reading the photographer’s intent (obscured text below) or other comments. The photographer seeks a genuinely unbiased first impression.

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What do you see upon initial viewing?

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Image Description

This a a photo of a portion of a freight rain moving through the Yakima River Canyon. I was experimenting with slow shutter speeds, camera movement, zooming in and out and in flipping he image in processing.

Technical Details

R5; 100/400 @263; 100ISO; 0.4 sec; 36; handheld; daylight; -2/3rds.

Specific Feedback

Curious about what others see.


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I don’t see anything identifiable. My eye is drawn to the V-shaped element coming down from the top.

It looks like a necklace with a gold pendant.

I like the soft color palette and warm tones. Nicely done.
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I’m not even venturing a guess as to what this is, but I do like the colors and radiating lines.

Looks like the timing belt Nebula to me, Jim. I don’t have a clue what the original image or images were.

And having read your description, this is a very original and beautiful image.

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@Don_Peters @Preston_Birdwell @Steve_Zimic @Dennis_Plank Thank you for your nice comments. I wasn’t sure if this fit Abstract Nature or Everything Else because of the human made element. My imagination has me seeing a person holding a large magnet above his head with his left arm.

Fascinating and very lovely!! After reading what it was, I’m even more puzzled how it came to be, but I’m glad it did – it checks all the boxes for excellent art!

@Diane_Miller Thank you!

I felt that I was looking at a abstraction of a necklace draped on abstracted fabric or skin.
I think this is a wonderful art piece, especially because it came from a camera as opposed from a brush on a blank palette.
I suppose some motion or ICM or zooming was involved, but thinking about How takes me away from enjoying the harmony of hues and shapes.

@Dick_Knudson Thank you for the nice comments.

What do I see?

Movement, energy.

The circular rim rushing away from the viewer – a bike tire? – has just bounced off the tubular structure coming in from the lower center-left. The explosive energy of the impact radiates out from the lightest, brightest colors into rays of different colors.

Which is to say that it’s a real abstract to me. I have no idea what the subject of the photo was. And I love that! It’s a puzzle that keeps me engaged as I try to come up with a story to explain it.

@Cathy_Proenza Thank you.