Chorus Line

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Description

Elephants in Etosha Park, Namibia
We were blessed with spectacular skies on many of our weeks in Africa.
This was not one of them. :frowning:
The big tree got a small haircut so it didn’t scraggle to the edges of the frame

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Technical Details

Nikon D850 (then)
500 mm

File Name: H:\AAA4N\RJB_3832 copy 2.jpg
Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Model: NIKON D800
Exposure Time: 1/400 sec
F Number: f/8
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 400
Exposure Program: Aperture priority
Metering Mode: Spot
Exposure Bias: -0.67 EV


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Great line up here!
You may crop out a touch on the LHS and may align the frame with water.

This is really nice, Sandy. I love the line of elephants, and I love the gnarled old trees and downed limb. The reflecting colors in the water are also really good. Great title.