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This is what happens when you have a fence with a flat surface Near your Feeder set up

Black headed Grosbeak
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Black headed Grosbeak

Dad feeding a juvenile
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Dad feeding a juvenile

Dad alone
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Dad alone

Anna
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Anna

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic + Technical

About This Image

This is a whole series of images that were taken out my bedroom window. I have a bunch of different perches set up out there. It is about 15 to 20 feet from the window and perfect for a 400 plus 1.4 Telexender.

Feedback Requested

Most helpful feedback would include anything that improves my skills.

Technical Details

This is what happens when you have a fence with a flat surface Near your Feeder set up
Camera: SONY ILCE-7RM6
Lens: FE 400mm F2.8 GM OSS + 1.4X Teleconverter
Focal length: 560mm
Shutter speed: 1/3200s
Aperture: f/8
ISO: 500
Flash: Fired

Black headed Grosbeak
Camera: SONY ILCE-7RM6
Lens: FE 400mm F2.8 GM OSS + 1.4X Teleconverter
Focal length: 560mm
Shutter speed: 1/3200s
Aperture: f/8
ISO: 3200

Dad feeding a juvenile
Camera: SONY ILCE-7RM6
Lens: FE 400mm F2.8 GM OSS + 1.4X Teleconverter
Focal length: 560mm
Shutter speed: 1/3200s
Aperture: f/8
ISO: 500
Flash: Fired

Dad alone
Camera: SONY ILCE-7RM6
Lens: FE 400mm F2.8 GM OSS + 1.4X Teleconverter
Focal length: 560mm
Shutter speed: 1/3200s
Aperture: f/8
ISO: 1250
Flash: Fired

Anna
Camera: SONY ILCE-7RM6
Lens: FE 400mm F2.8 GM OSS + 1.4X Teleconverter
Focal length: 560mm
Shutter speed: 1/3200s
Aperture: f/8
ISO: 1250

2 Likes
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A fine set of images David. The last two are my favorites for the over the shoulder pose in the fourth image and the bird on cool branch in the last photo. Nice details too.

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I missed these earlier, but glad I found them. All are lovely but my favorite is the first for the cautious approach – it elicits a big smile! Only suggestion is to do a slight burn on the lichen in the last one. A nice setup that should reward you with some lovely images.

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@Diane_Miller @Allen_Sparks

Thank you both for looking at these.

Diane, I agree with you about the liking. It’s a little over the top and brightness. And that’s liking as in.Lichen.

Some could certainly write a comedy book about voice typed speech.

Enjoy

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Someone should! I have enough trouble understanding videos by people with a foreign accent (and most seem to also have a speech defect) that I often use the CCs. That software usually has even more trouble understanding them than I do.