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About This Image
Enjoyed this one!
Saw this little series of dramas unfolding as I crossed the bridge!
I do try and make my snaps on holiday as good as I can, veering away from the ordinary . My nature and street photography eyes look for unusual angles, juxtapositions, strong (sometimes multiple) narratives. I was really lucky to grab this one.
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I hope you like this one.
Suggestions for improvement most welcome as always
I like this, Huw. The multiple narratives come through very nicely. If I had to find a nit,it would be the hand of the woman in black touching the sign which for some reason bugs me, but in this kind of scene something is always going to be weird.
Thanks Dennis
I hadn’t noticed the post/hand foreground/BG overlap
I asked Ai to fix it but bizarrely gave her another right hand - so I think I’ll live with it. Subject/BG clashes are inevitable in multiple narratives such as this . The excitement is that the multiple stories remind me of old comic storybooks - and they convey the bustle of the place to me
