Mountains - A Closer Look #2

Image Critiques
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Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

This is the second image from my new series “Mountains - A Closer Look”. I wanted to focus on intimate mountain views, leaving my comfort zone regarding a “balanced” composition in some of them. Thereby the sense of tension and motion should be emphasized, capturing the ongoing change in nature. The image shows a rock face in the Italian Dolomites, near Lago di Misurina.

Feedback Requested

All comments and critique are welcome.

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Hi Peter,

IMO you succeeded as the motion and tension is evident in this intimate section of rock face you captured. I quite like the pastel tones of the rock as it seems to soften the hard rugged nature of the mountain wall. Was it snowing by any chance? I ask because the image seems to have this side to side motion; almost like streaking snow. I like this as is, but I could also see cropping off the clouds along the top making this more of an abstract. Either way this is beautifully done.