NZ Pied Stilt and Juveniles

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RB_06422 copy 2XNB
RB_06422 copy 2XNB1918×1261 1.07 MB

Critique Style Requested: Standard

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Description

New Zealand Pied Stilts - 3 juveniles with mom on the right
Nugget Point, South Island, NZ

Specific Feedback

comments and suggestions welcome
Sony A1
200-600 @ 600
Software: Adobe Photoshop 26.5 + DxO pure raw (Windows)
Date Taken: 2025-04-04 19:23:42
Exposure Time: 1/2500 sec
F Number: f/18
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 6400
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0 EV

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A fine array of stilts, Sandy. It’s interesting to see them foraging on the beach instead of in the water. There are several little black particles in the scene that give the impression (whether or not it’s the case) that there was debris on your lens. You might want to eradicate them.

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Interesting grouping of birds Sandy. They seem to be on a leisurely family stroll. Image quality is lacking for some reason.

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Hi Sandy
Great photograph of the “Shirelles” in concert, or NZ Stilts. I love the framing.
Peter