NZ White-Faced Heron ( Matuku Moana)

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Description

The white-faced heron, also known as matuku moana in Māori, is New Zealand’s most common heron.
White-faced herons occur throughout Australia, New Guinea and New Zealand. They are a relatively new species in New Zealand, having self-introduced in the 1940s.

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Technical Details

Sony A1 II
200-600 @ 600
Software: PS 2025 + DxO Pure Raw 4
Date Taken: 2025-04-04 19:34:26
Exposure Time: 1/2500 sec
F Number: f/8
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 2000
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0 EV

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An interesting variation on the heron family, Sandy. It looks like it blends very well with the rocks behind it. There are a couple of small brighter spots that tend to pull my eye a bit. I downloaded your image and circled them rather than try to describe their locations.

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Hi Sandy
Very interesting Heron. I like the framing and background. The Heron has good eye contact, control of the whites and feather dental.
Peter

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Sandy: the bird stands out beautifully against the dark background. Very nice pose and excellent detail in the feathers.