Rennaisance.

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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

A reflection of a reflection. Early morning calm on a Mediterranean shore. Gently lapping waves and the sound of a pair of seagulls for company. Lost. Lost in myself and in the scene that was presenting itself giving me time to personally reflect on how beautiful this gift of life is.

Technical Details

Shot at f5.6 1/640 & iso 500

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Water married sky
Shared colors, no horizon
Blended peace and light

Certainly your creation deserves a better haiku than this effort ā€¦ the point is, this piece of art sends me! You have taken a sight in nature, incorporated its feelings into yourself and found a way to convey it to us. Thank you.

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Dewi, this is a very gentle, peaceful, inviting abstraction where the spread of light and dark tones encourages visual exploration of the entire frame.

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Thank you so much Mark. Iā€™m happy that it resonates with you.

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Your haiku is beautiful.
Thank you so much!!