Swinging Fly? (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 1 (latest)

What changed: stem blurred a bit more with blur tool

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

House Fly - Phaonia angelicae I think (inaturalist wasn’t sure)

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic + Technical

About This Image

Ok first time - this one is my first proper attempt at a hand stacked 11 images and truly was a very small fly.

Feedback Requested

Just thoughts on the presentation within the limits of the technical kit I had - hand held
The DOF was so narrow but I’m pleased - as a starting point anyway.
Does the stalk the fly was on look silly?? It seems to emphasise the DOF narrative and they look good blurred - just a very abrupt transition - again part of the narrative.

The full frame uncropped example shows what I was trying…


Couldn’t get closer or it would have moved!

Technical Details

Camera: A7v
Lens:90mm
Focal length:90mm f2.8 macro
Shutter speed: 1/3200 burst mode 20-30fps
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO:6400
Flash: no

Stacked in Zerene and denoised in Topaz. Will try DXO next time and have to try 10fps with flash in a more accessible environment.

Wonderful capture and I love the soft colors! I could wish for more depth of the stack, for the perch almost more than for the fly. I would be tempted to blur the sharpest part of the branch a bit.

I love the full frame also! Rather psychedelic!

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The original poster added a revised version of their image.

I like the shallow dof on this one, Huw and the abrupt transition didn’t bother me. Beautiful job on the fly itself. You might look at bringing down those two bright stubs on either side of the perch at the near leg as they seem to be a bit of a distraction. Other than that a fine image and I really love the hourglass effect on the perch from the shallow dof.