Well done James. A marked improvement in the sky for sure and I like the higher contrast with the harsh, desert hillsides. True grit. Thanks for sharing the update.
Wow, great improvement over your original post (sorry, didn’t get a chance to comment.) This is such a stark and desolate landscape and you’ve done a great job presenting this in b&w - very appropriate. The curved road works especially well here - and mostly because of it’s dynamic s-curve; a straight road I think might have been more of a distraction rather than an asset.
At first I thought the contrast was a little harsh - especially relative to your original. However, opening up the larger view, the increased contrast really emphasizes the harshness of the environment.
Oh, and the sky and tonal gradation are much improved as well.
This is a terrific image and interpretation from DV. Beautifully seen and captured. And thanks for taking the time on the re-work. It certainly paid off.