Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
The Spoonbill gave me a couple go nice shot of it in the rain.
Oct. 20, at 4:50 PM.
Thank you for stopping by.
Peter
Specific Feedback
any
Technical Details
Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm f7.1, 500mm, 1/500, -1EV, ISO 640, and cropped by 5%, In DXP PhotoLab 8, I used a Hue Pick to brink up the reds
Critique Template
Use of the template is optional, but it can help spark ideas.
- Vision and Purpose:
- Conceptual:
- Emotional Impact and Mood:
- Composition:
- Balance and Visual Weight:
- Depth and Dimension:
- Color:
- Lighting:
- Processing:
- Technical:
Peter, an excellent image of this gorgeous bird! Really fine feather detail, eye, and colours. I love the “demure” look. The rain drops add a lot.
Really great shot!
Very nice, Peter. The overcast weather really brought out the color well. The whites look good and I really like the pose. Well done.
Great pose Peter - love how that red eye really stands out. The other pinkish plumage is well handled also. Nicely composes and the rain adds another element of interest.
Hi Sandy ,Dennis & Allen
Thank you for your comments, it was nice of the Spoonbill to keep it’s eyes open for that photograph.
Peter
Ooooh, I like the pink and red colors here Peter. The cloudy, rainy conditions really allow for some nice light. Great feather details too and nice BG.
Excellent capture!! There is a little more color in the bill in the second one – I wonder if it can be found in the first one, which is a very nice pose. Looks like yellows have been desaturated a little. It feels like both need a little CCW rotation to level up the ripples.
Hi Ed & Diane
Thank you for the comments. Diane your were correct, the yellow HSL hue picker was turn way down. The only think I can think of, it was left over from copy and past, that wasn’t cleared. I rotated the photographs CCW. (I was running out of head room)
Peter
