At the Nursery

[Bonnie_Lampley]

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Description

The clouds on this day were just lovely. Viewing them through the shade cloth that covers the tender plants was a treat.

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Any comments welcome. I may eventually make a series out of these kinds of images made at this nursery.

Technical Details

Hand held. Not sure why I didn’t stop down more. Converted to b&w in PS because it is more about the patterns and textures, not the color.

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[Mark_Seaver]

Bonnie, this is very interesting and nicely abstract. It seems that the overhead cloth is thicker, which blurs those clouds more and emphasizes the lines. I’m thoroughly enjoying the moire textures in the cloth hanging down over the lower 1/3 and wondering about bringing out more of those in the lighter regions of that section.