Between Storm and Light (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 1 (latest)

What changed: The one I originally posted looks perhaps a bit too dramatic ? Hence this precursor of the original - essentially lightened the blacks

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

Photographed as the sun sets , with an on going storm punctuated with lightning

Feedback Requested

I’m wondering whether the mood or feeling I was aiming for comes through. There seems to be a lot going on with a wide dynamic rtange

Technical Details

Camera: NIKON Z 9
Lens: NIKKOR Z 100-400mm f/4.5-5.6 VR S
Focal length: 100mm
Shutter speed: 1/20s
Aperture: f/22
ISO: 64

Karl,

Oh My! Please tell me you’re working towards publishing a book on the subject and your moments of epic weather drama?
Seriously, some fantastic imagery you’ve been capturing and presenting.

How you’ve handled the dynamic range here is quite impressive. I’m not sure what mood you were going for or experienced, but this is jam-packed full of mood and atmosphere. I dunno, “Glory” comes to mind. Maybe Forest Gump said it best, “…when the sun comes up…I couldn’t tell where heaven stopped and the Earth began” That’s what I’m thinking.

This series with the lightning bolts are just fabulous, and this one is no exception.

I have no suggestions other than ‘print it’!
-P

Karl: In-freaking-credible! What a spectacular scene and a terrific capture of the moment. Do you use a lightning trigger or just react when a bolt strikes? However you’re accomplishing it the results are marvelous. >=))>

The original poster added a revised version of their image.

Thanks @Lon_Overacker @Preston_Birdwell and @Bill_Fach

All too generous!

Lon - this is first time I have photographed lightning - used the Bolt Hunter trigger - worth it weight in gold - daytime captures require exposing for the landscape at 1/15 to 1/20 secs and letting the trigger do its job.

At night however, there is a Night mode which didnt seem that effective and I dont know why. Instead, for eg I bracketed sunsets like this one and then chose. As it got darker, i did time lapse and actually made a half decent movie which I would be happy to share here - but dont know how to - movement of clouds with that of the milky Way came out quite sweet :slight_smile:

And Lon, yes - I am in the process of making a coffee table book - 20 pages - with some edu on lightning, the atmosphere, with about 12-14 images to support it

Beautiful image, Karl and your instinct to go with the revised version really works for me. Getting the golden light into those areas changed the mood a lot and smoothed the transitions in the image which appealed to me.