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Generally, I’m just putzing about whilst I relearn how to do Kallitype printing.
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Image Description
This Kallitype print is made from two composited negatives, processed in Black Kallitype developer and toned in Gold Chloride. For those not familiar with the Kallitype, this is about as close to being a Platinum print as you can get and considerably less expensive. When I get to where I feel I can re-master this process, I’ll switch to Platinum or Palladium salts for toning and it will be nearly impossible to tell it from its parent process.
(I think I should have left it in the EDTA Clearing Bath a bit longer and cleared the whites as they still look a bit milky to me.)
Technical Details
All the particulars to the forest were given in a former post, “Where the Meadow Meets the Forest.”
The birds just flew in when I wasn’t looking.
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