What changed: The original post has a somewhat limited dynamic range, so I went back to push the contrast. This version is much more dramatic. While it may get more attention, I’m not sure it’s a better representation of the actual scene… Something in between may be the best.
Added after receiving feedback from the community.
The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.
Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive
About This Image
There’s one section of the C&O canal that holds warm water from a local power plant. Someone released carp into it years ago and they are now huge, (2-3 feet long). We’ve had a cool wet July so the water is quite clear, letting me get some good looks at these carp as they roam. The water is also shallow, so the fish are easy to see. This one was just below the surface.
Feedback Requested
I like the decent look at the fish and all of the reflections from the water surface. The reflections are darkened because I was using a polarizer and had it rotated to minimize the reflections, letting the fish show clearly. The reflections were enough to add a touch of abstraction, which helps fill the frame with interest.
Technical Details
Camera: Canon EOS R5
Lens: RF100-500mm F4.5-7.1 L IS USM
Focal length: 428mm
Shutter speed: 1/800s
Aperture: f/10
ISO: 3200
Hi Mark— I agree that the water’s reflections which are lighter in color provide an interesting canvas for the trout taking its time. Its deep blue/violet coloring balances well with this background and makes it clearly stand out. I also like the fact that the subject is immersed and not as they say, tack sharp, but sharp enough so the story of this fish can be told!
Your polarizer did very well and we can see enough of the carp against a very interesting, colorful BG. Carp will rise readily and take cottonwood tree seeds when available. The subject is also in the perfect spot within the frame. Have you played around with increasing the contrast slightly? Just curious to see how it would increase the abstract feel to the image…Jim
Mark, I think this is a very effective image. The reflections on the water almost create an impressionistic feeling to me, while the carp itself quickly catches your attention. It looks to me as if the dorsal fin is above the water’s surface but I can’t be for sure.
I really don’t have anything to pick at here, except possible playing with contrast a little as @Jim_Zablotny suggested.
I much prefer the revised version. Yeah, you mention it doesn’t reflect the reality of what you saw/experienced… but here’s my thought: You also categorized with “Abstract,” and to me, that tosses reality out the windows - at least in terms of what you saw. In other words, “what you saw” or what the conditions actually were if photographed to retain that, is more documentary than abstract. Just my .02.
Very cool image for sure. I must admit, the carp isn’t my favorite thing… but I much prefer to think of this as a Koi pond, and then I like it more. ha ha. I had played with contrast and color balance, but no need to post now that I see your revision.. The water patterns are definitely cool and I suppose are what makes this a nature abstract.
Mark: As an unrepentant and avowed color junkie I like the revision a lot. A good solid comp and capture mated with some expert processing. And no stack! >=))>
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