Critique Style Requested: Initial Reaction
Please share your immediate response to the image before reading the photographer’s intent (obscured text below) or other comments. The photographer seeks a genuinely unbiased first impression.
Questions to guide your feedback
Does this make you nervous? Anxious? What mood do you get?
Other Information
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Image Description
This is a composite of trees & sky + a log on the trail. I was hiking in Lassen Volcanic National Park, so the idea of an eruption feels appropriate. I didn’t see it until I converted to b&w, though. The textures took the stage then vs. the color version which was quite odd looking.
Technical Details
Both photos made with an iPhone 14 Pro. Processed in ACR & PS; layer stack. Second layer blended in exclusion mode; third layer (mask to pixels) blended in darken mode:
Specific Feedback
Any feedback is welcome, especially what mood it evokes. Technically, the “sky” is fairly low contrast, which looked right to me - I wanted it to look like volcanic eruption clouds. More contrast made it look more like what it was.
I fussed with the trees a lot to make them blend properly. There’s a bit of weirdness there - is it off-putting?
Critique Template
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