Homeward bound

Critique Style Requested: Standard

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Description

Taken at the late evening , lying flat on the ground , although difficult, increased the white balance to shade as well as used negative exposure compensation, Manual priority,

Technical Details

Aperture was 6.3, shutter 1 in 2500, exp compensation was -0.3, matrix metering , Nikon z8 with 180 to 600 lens


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You’ve handled the lighting very well, both on the bird and across the water. It looks to be carrying something in its mouth.

Great color here! And I really enjoy how you’ve centered the focus just on the plane with the bird.