Majestic Tusker

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Description

A majestic tusker stands tall, gazing straight ahead across the marshlands of Amboseli, while clumps of clouds fill the sky in a dramatic backdrop.

Technical Details

Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm f/4.5-7.1 IS Lens.
1/500 sec, f/9, ISO-320


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It’s a fascinating shot Sandipan, I like it a lot.
The elephant may be standing tall, but with its legs hidden in the grass we have a wonderful headshot.
The straight on framing and slightly extending ears emphasise the huge size and power of the animal.
The B/W works well giving a dramatic sky.
Some might suggest removing the long blade of grass on the left, but i’m not sure if you need to.

Nice composition of a mature bull elephant. Wouldn’t change a thing.

A beautifully framed portrait, I may prefer to go for darker mid-tones and the elephant appears to be over-sharpened a touch.

@Ryan_H @framingtheuntamed @JRajput Many thanks for the feedback.

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