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I’m still getting the hang of multiple exposures. Saguaros seemed like a promising subject.
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As far as I can tell, EXIF data doesn’t tell you an image is a multiple exposure. It also doesn’t tell you the settings of the different shots in a multiple exposure. At least one of them was ISO 100, 300mm, f/16, 1/6th sec. There was a lot of color variation in the original because I used different white-balance settings for the different shots. I made some additional changes to the colors in processing.
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what a beautiful piece of art, @Don_Peters! I very much like the abstract feel of this image as well as the color play. I instantly wish my camera would allow for in camera ME - but unfortunately I shoot Sony and have to go through photoshop… it’s just not the same… anyways I might be mistaken, but could there be a sensor just spot in the upper middle white finger (right side) and on the left blue finger (same position)? a lovely image, I especially like the pink outline at the top of the overlapping blue finger. I might even try to accentuate that a bit more to create a bit more separation. great shot!
Very creative, especially your use of WB to get those colors. I wonder how the BG turned out pink. Do you remember the original BG color? With that fine composition, I’d put this on my wall.
Thanks, Mike. The background was a very light blue in the Raw image. I didn’t come up with the idea of using different white balances on the different shots in a multiple exposure. People such as Valda Bailey and Doug Chinnery do it routinely. The color differences can be translated into tonal differences.
