Mr. and Mrs. House Finch

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Description

I managed to get this husband and wife portrait a couple of mornings ago in the backyard. I like the contrast of the super dark BG (which was real).

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Cropping? Anything?

Technical Details

Z9, 180-600 lens, Nikon 1.4 TC, monopod, 1/1000th, f 8.5, 855mm, ISO 1800, cropped to 1507 x 1163

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Nice grouping, Dave, and I like the background. It looks like the perch was angled away from you and the male is just a touch soft. You might select him and try a bit of extra sharpening. A fine image of these two.