NZ Variable Oystercatcher

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What an interesting bird! “Variable” is a very descriptive name.
There are a number of morphs, including this all-black one, as well as varying degrees of white on the breast and body.
Others morpha posted later.

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New Zealand is full of marvelous rocky beaches, as well as stunning clouds.
I wanted to keep many of the rocks here for interest and context.

Comments and suggestions welcome

Technical Details

Sony A1
200-600 + TC 1.4
Software: Adobe Photoshop 26.5 + DxO Pure Raw 4
Date Taken: 2025-04-04 19:38:23
Exposure Time: 1/2500 sec
F Number: f/6.3
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 1600
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Exposure Bias: 0 EV

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Nice pose, Sandy and I like the way it fits with the rocks in the background. I could see trying to tease a bit more texture out of the plumage, but it’s tough to do so without making the blacks look too gray.

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In Australia we have Sooty Oystercatchers that look very much like this one. They are really lovely birds.

You’ve captured the “march” that oystercatchers do.

I agree with @Dennis_Plank . I reckon there is a lot more texture in the blacks to be found. I do realise you are most likely working off a lap-top or similar, so “seeing” might be the issue.

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Interesting bird and nice catch in its environment. Love that long orange beak. Nice walking pose. I could see lightening the image in general and see what that looked like.