Old Sea Wall

Weekly Challenge

Geological Wonders
7/12/26 - 7/18/26
Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

This is an intimate landscape - from one of the rocks of the huge sea wall in Newport, South Wales, UK.

I love the colours and the textures, and looking for images in places you wouldn’t normally look. I think its beautiful anyway :slight_smile:

Feedback Requested

Does this work as an intimate landscape?

Technical Details

Camera: ILCE-7M3
Lens: Sony Fe 28/F2
Focal length: 28mm
Shutter speed:1/250
Aperture: f/13
ISO:1600
Flash:no

Huw: Beautiful indeed and a nice find with the varied textures and color palette. Certainly works as an intimate for me and I like that there is no obvious sense of scale. Well seen, captured and presented.>=))>

Thanks Bill

This almost looks like wood with the colour tones and textures. Quite a colour splash with the rust and ochre and mustard shades. Nice contrast between the prominent slab and the adjoining stones.

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Many thanks @madd_laura

Beautiful indeed Huw. I love the rich colors, textures and detail. This is not unlike the rock wall I frequent near Yosemite; and I wouldn’t have thought a sea wall either. (not that it matters..)

I’m going to assume your depth of field and selective focus - isolating the rust colors, was intentional. I think you used the specific aperture and focus point to allow the foreground rock to be soft, drawing further focus on the rust-colored textures. And to a lesser extent, the fall off in sharpness going deeper in to the frame. Keeping in mind, all that softer rock is of the cooler variety. And with all that, I think this actually works quite well.

The obvious comment/suggestion which surfaced in another post, was that you could use a focus stack here to get everything sharp front to back. That is, IF, that was your goal. Honestly, not sure if this would have worked as well being sharp front to back.

If it were sharp front to back, I would be inclined to crop this a little off the bottom (not a fan of the tall format. Plus, I think the bottom 25% doesn’t add much that isn’t already above.

Anyway, I’d be curious to hear your thoughts on the depth of field.