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Description
Yesterday I did three hikes at Canyonlands NP, each time exploring an area I’d not yet visited. The first two were nice hikes but I didn’t find much that inspired me. The third - and shortest - kept me busy for over three hours. This was a hike just under 1 mile R/T, so it’s safe to say it was a target rich environment. The conditions were also good upon arrival, and only got better from there.
I’m a sucker for pinyon pine and juniper trees. This one, gracefully stretching its limbs to mirror the shape of the sandstone outcrop from which it sprouts, caught my eye and kept my attention for a long while. I explored every angle with my camera, and this was one of my favorite perspectives. I had initially considered cloning out the tree in the background but the longer I worked on the image, the more I came to believe that it needed to remain as I like the perspective it offers. I also think there’s more of a story of place with it in the frame.
Specific Feedback
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Technical Details
Sony A7IV
Sony 24-105mm lens at 24mm
ISO 100
1/20s @ f/18
Handheld (gasp!)
Lightroom > Photoshop > Nik Color Efex
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I love those moments when I get lost in a subject; it sounds like that happened to you here!
I think this scene works quite well. That’s a great juniper with a lot of character, and the sandstone and sky drama provide some nice framing.
I’m not sure if you have added a vignette, but I think this could use one (or more). You might add it asymmetrically to darken that upper left corner more (unless you are after an effect of light reaching out to the tree).
I like the tinting, but you might play with reducing the cyan just a tiny bit.
This is nice, Bret. I love the perspective from this angle. I agree the BG tree should remain. It gives the image some depth which is hard to achieve in a 2 dimensional medium. I have to be totally honest, I’m not a fan of the blue/cyan tint. JMHO
Bret, excellent composition. Leaving the distant tree helps balance the scene with the front pine. I did find the blue / cyan cast strong and used Bill Chambers cast removal process here and just an idea for another look. As always, if the composition and focus are there all other changes are optional and personal tastes in the end.
Thank you for the comments, everyone. I think I went a little overboard with the toning. I’m experimenting with a new technique and still getting it dialed in. I’m not a fan of warmer black and white images, which is what led me to begin experimenting with this toning process. I do find @Paul_Breitkreuz version to be an improvement. It feels more pure black and white, without warm or cool tones, and I like that.
As always, great feedback from you all. Thank you!
Hi Bret,
I have to say that I am loving the low POV for this American Southwest landscape along with the way that FG juniper seems to mimic the diagonal line of the sandstone formation. I am glad you decided to leave that BG tree in as it adds so much depth to this image. I could see backing off the cyan tint just a little, but that is personal preference and not a critique. I hope to see more from this particular location since it kept you busy for three hours. Beautifully done.
