Poppies + Edit

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Edit:

SRB_AB100 copy 4XNBX
SRB_AB100 copy 4XNBX1707×2200 969 KB

original:

SRB_AB100 copy 3XNB.jpg
SRB_AB100 copy 3XNB.jpg1630×2000 954 KB

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Whispers of the dawn,
Abstract poppies sway and dance,
Color blooms in dreams.

Specific Feedback

comments, suggestions, nits - all welcome

Technical Details

My original watercolour from long ago, enhanced now with watercolor filters and blurs

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Love it! Very pleasing and the colors are so vibrant!

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Nice watercolor effect and an excellent composition, Sandy.

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Sandy, the shapes and colors are lovely. But what immediately drew my eye was the watermark. You might consider using a less obtrusive one.

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@Don_Peters
Thanks - here is a less-obtrusive WM, and I also did some other minor corrections

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I like the revision.

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Sandy: Stunningly beautiful and so creatively fashioned. Wonderful.>=))>