The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Here in Montana, Fall sometimes is just an extension of Summer, just with less sunlight. Othertimes, Fall can mean a fleeting visit from Winter. After several inches fell overnight around Bozeman, I took a drive up a local canyon to see what I could see. Recent shoulder surgery has had me cooped up with little opportunity to photograph, but I just couldn’t resist. Thank goodness for tripods and cable releases since it was my right shoulder.
Specific Feedback
I’ve increased the luminosity of the reds and yellows. Did I overdo that or does it work? I also added a vignette to try to create a little separation from the background trees. All that snow on the limbs is a bit busy, but also a bit stimulating. I wanted to get more of the foreground because of that lovely little fir tree on the left, but I was actually standing in the road and there is a guardrail right under the bottom edge of this photo.
Technical Details
Nikon D850
Nikon 70-300 f4.5-5.6
ISO 64, f/9, 1/20th, 112 mm
Critique Template
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Paul, this is really a lovely early-winter scene. I love the red and yellow leaves against the fresh snow.
Overall, it seems quit dark to me and in need of perking up a bit.
I hope you don’t mind that I played with it a bit…
lightened the whole thing
slight increase in contrast
brightened the darker yellow leaves
cropped to avoid the dark areas in the upper right
used a very small bit of Gen Fill to fill in some of the (to me) distracting dark areas among the leaves.
Just some thoughts… see what you think
A wonderful find!
Glad you were able to get out and capture this scene Paul. Hopefully your recovery is going well. This is a wonderful intimate scene of the transition of the seasons. My initial thoughts were exactly the same as @SandyR-B and her rework looks perfect IMO. Beautifully done.
Paul, this is a fine look at last week’s snow, with the colors “peeking” through. I agree that brighter is better. The burned-in upper right looks about right and nicely sets off the foreground tree. Best wishes with your recovery.
Paul. I really love this one. I love the soft snow covering the thin branches going everywhere and the spots of bright reds and yellows. Beautiful. I’m sorry, but I also liked the idea of applying a posterizing filter from my gallery of artistic filters just for fun. I hope you don’t mind too much. This would make a great Christmas card.
