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I tend to favor more detailed maximalist images, and while I love the way the details make the image lean toward abstraction, I wonder if so much details is a bit too much? I love for the viewer to get lost in the image, but this may be over the top!
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Image Description
This image is a part of an ongoing series I am working on called “Shorelines” in which I try to capture the liminal space between water and land. This image, conceptually, is a bit of a variation on this, as this stream is snowmelt in the middle of a mountain forest, so the waterway in and of itself is liminal.
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I’m not much interested in the technical aspects of a photo, although I can say it was taken with a kit lens.
F11, 1/320 sec. 2000 ISO.
My first reaction was that it looked like shiny metal. Then upon closer inspection, the super high contrast does have some appeal, but its not keeping my interest for long due to the brightness. The patterns are really interesting both in the needles and in the water reflections on the top part of the photo.
Your image caught my eye, because of the contrast between light/dark and linear/curved parts of the photo. I think it works well as an abstract so that detail is less important but does not distract. Good capture.
Marianne, it’s very interesting and engaging. In the top half, you might consider darkening the bright areas and lightening the dark ones. I think you’d get a more balanced result.
Well, i did get lost Marianne. When i first viewed the image, i couldn’t get my eyes to focus and then i realized that it image is so complex, that i have to readjust my eyes when viewing different parts of the photograph. Still, it is a challenging photograph, very close to the top. I agree with Don, perhaps lightening and darkening the bottom and top would smooth the image.
Hi Taiyo - Thank you so much for your feedback - I do appreciate it! I will try Don’s suggestion - maybe that will help make it a little easier to view.
Hi Marianne! The image small in the feed drew my attention with the high contrast and complexity. Viewing it larger, I do agree that the top of the image feels slightly too bright to where it’s challenging on the eyes. Bringing down the brightness there would invite the viewer to linger longer and appreciate all the small details.
