Siblings

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Description

Here’s a bird box that the gray squirrels have taken over. Here are the latest youngsters to hatch out of it. It was a hot afternoon. Can you tell by their body language?

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Cropping? Background?

Technical Details

Z9, 180-600 lens, Nikon 1.4 TC, monopod, 1/3200th, f 9.0, 370mm, ISO 11400, cropped to 5227 x 7093.


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What a fun shot, Dave. “Hurry up, bud, I want to sharpen my teeth too!” Maybe blur or clone the right side BG a bit to make the upper squirrel’s head more visible? And do those greenish patches on their fur really exist (like on sloths)? No matter, this is a very entertaining look at the two mischief-makers!

A very fun image, Dave. I’m not sure I get the feeling of heat from this, but it does look like a very sunny day. Mike mentioned greenish patches on the squirrels. The color feels a bit off to me, but I’m viewing it on a laptop as my desktop is in the shop.