Spring Crocus

Critique Style Requested: Standard

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Description

Beneath winter’s hush,
Purple crocus breaks the frost,
Hope in blooms of light.

Spring crocus from our garden

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comments and suggestions welcome

Technical Details

Sony A1
70-200 @200
F2.8
1/350
ISO 1000
Spot metering
Selective focus with focus peaking
Blurs


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4 Likes

Interesting and appropriate soft focus on this pair, Sandy. It works very well.

Sandy: Crocus don’t happen in our part of the world so I always enjoy images of them and this is a good one. I love the color palette throughout especially. I do think I would like one point of sharp focus to settle on but the overall soft focus presentation works with the soft colors. Nicely done. >=))>