Straw-Necked Ibis

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

Late afternoon at a suburban lake. Sometimes you see these birds in pasture land by the hundreds. They look fairly ordinary until the sun hits them. This one was wondering if the person lying prostrate in the duck muck needed any attention. Well, they didn’t until it was time to get up.

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Comments and suggestions are always appreciated.

Technical Details

Camera: 5D4
Lens: Sigma 150-600mm Sport - Handheld
Focal length: 600mm
Shutter speed: 1/640
Aperture: f6.3
ISO: 400
Conditions: Late afternoon, bright sky

Processing software: PS
Major adjustments: BG taming
Other notes: In ACR, very basic adjustments of Highlight taming. In PS - NR and a bit of work taming the bright spots in the top left to middle in the BG. Image rotated to level.

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This is a well done image of an unusual bird. I like the color and the detail. Composition and lighting or excellent.

you have a lot of interesting birds in Australia. Actually, you have a lot of interesting wildlife in Australia, including Roos, koalas , emus and of course ostrich.

In high school, my girlfriend was from Adelaide. Her father worked at the Australian Embassy in Washington DC, and we lived in the suburbs.

After a couple of years, I started to develop an Australian accent, and my friends and family noticed it.

But that was more than 60 years ago…

Hi Glenys, so well done. Love those colors popping all over on the bird and the splayed out neck is great. Great low angle and fine background. Nice catch in stride too. Well done!

Very well done, Glennie. All the Ibis species seem to have those iridescent wings that look wonderful in the right light. This one is gorgeous and the “straw neck” name looks wonderfully appropriate. The head turn and your beautiful low angle make this one special.

Excellent in all respects. “(L)ying prostrate in the duck muck” really paid off. The perspective and focus are wonderful.

Thank you @David_Schoen ! Yes. We have some pretty unique animals here. But, your animals are interesting to me. I cannot imagine my love of the outdoors would be so grand if I knew I might end up as a meal for a bear! The ostrich comment was spot on. Not native, but there is a small flock in SA doing quite well. By the way we are eradicating non native species here, they won’t be around much longer. Ah! The good ol’ Aussie drawl!

Thankyou @Jim_Gavin , @Dennis_Plank , @Allen_Sparks ! Your comments are always appreciated.

Great photo. Such a beautiful bird. I love the colors and the composition. I like the birds posture and position just walking towards us. Very nice.

What a lovely portrait!! And wonderfully different from our plain, regular Ibis – you caught the perfect pose to show the details and iridescent feathers. And the perfect interpretation of his look! Lovely light and BG — no suggestions except maybe taking a little off the right – an 8x10 format might work well here.

I would have passed on this low perspective for lack of a hazmat suit. Glad you did it right!

Un fair, Glenys. That is just a beautiful photograph.

Peter

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Thank you @timothy3 , @Diane_Miller and @Peter_Morrissey ! Yes, Diane. A little off the RHS would be nice.

An outstanding, low angle capture showing the beauty of this subject.

Congratulations on the EP! Very well-deserved!

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To quote Diane: “Congratulations on the EP! Very well-deserved!” It certainly is.

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Glenys,

Oh my, what a wonderful capture and image of this unusual (to me) bird. This popped to the top after the EP and I had to comment! And congrats on the EP - well deserved.

First , I can’t believe the sharpness and this being handheld. Ok, you’re prone in the duck-muck and so I imagine you had the lens braced somehow. But it doesn’t matter, you nailed it!

Love everything here. The colors of the bird are amazing - and not any less, I love the bg colors as well. This is just beautifully captured. Well done. No nits or suggestions from me.

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