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Description
I set up the R5 with a wide lens on the tracker, just next to the house, hoping to catch a few Perseids, not expecting to see any aurora this far south. I only caught a few likely meteors, two of which are in this exposure, from 10:22 pm. With the usual luck here, fog rolled in by 10:45 and the peak activity was likely well after that. (It had looked like the fog would come in hours later.) But at least I have finally caught a few photons from the aurora. The trees are blurry due to the tracker rotating to follow the stars during the 60 second exposure, and by this time it had rotated maybe 25 degrees CCW from when I started it with the camera level. There is a hill on the left but its not that steep . (Polaris is a little above center and the Andromeda galaxy is a blur just under the lower power line close to the right edge.) I’ll set up tonight without tracking and see if there is any more aurora activity. Just don’t want to spend the night on a dark hilltop an hour away and too much else going on to want to fly somewhere and camp under the plane, so I’ll settle for what I can get from home. Maybe we’ll make more effort for the Perseids next year. The radiant is almost on the horizon from here.
Specific Feedback
All comments welcome! I hope some of you had better results!
Technical Details
No adjustments in LR. Into PS for Topaz Denoise (Severe Noise at defaults) then Dust and Scratches filter at 1 px.
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